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2014-03-05 00:45:56
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There are four people and one dog in my family.
My mom, dad, brother, me and Sookie. She's lazy, fat, huge, clever, and lovely.
Actually, My father works abroad and my brother serves in the military, so there's only mom, sookie and me at home.
일단은 My mom, dad, sookie and myself. myself가 적당할거 같구요. 그리고 She's lazy, fat, 이거는 주어가 엄마인지, 수키인지 잘 모르게 애매하게 써놨거든요?
그리고 형용사를 나열할때도 연관성이 있어야 되요. 그래서 좀 자연스럽게 바꾸자면, she is lazy, fat and huge girl, but also she is clever, and lovely.
뭐 이런식으로 쓰는게 좀더 자연스러을거 같ㅊ네요.