<div>원 게시글 : </div> <div>http://www.todayhumor.co.kr/board/view.php?table=humorbest&no=868766&s_no=868766&kind=search&page=1&keyfield=subject&keyword=%ED%98%84%EC%83%81%ED%99%A9</div> <div><br /></div> <div><br /></div> <div><br /></div>These translations from the original poster and the following post are excellent and display very high quality writing styles but there are a few changes I would make. I've underlined the changes I made and I also suggest you change the tense to one standard in the whole text. I notice that in some sentences the situation is described in the present tense, but then this changes to the past tense suddenly. Change this and it's perfect.  <div><br /></div> <div>It's an important subject so I'd be happy to help you further this evening (I'm in Ireland). </div> <div><br /></div> <div>-Andrew<br /> <div><br /></div> <div><span style="line-height: 19.200000762939453px; background-color: #ebf6f8"><font size="3">The Emergency Headquarters at Jindo has decided to withdraw from the scene. Upon <b><u>hearing</u></b> this devastating news, families of the missing students, along with the bereaved families, decided to head to the Blue House(Korean Presidential Residence). The families agreed to rent a bus, but <b><u>plain-clothes</u></b> police officers reported their activity. Within minutes, ten police buses arrived, <u>i</u><b><u>ndicating that the police had already been viewing families as potential criminals</u>. </b>The police officers are blocking the path and <b><u>so</u></b> the families decided to go to the bus terminal on foot. However, the rented bus was <b>nowhere</b> to be found. The determined families are now walking up to Mokpo, which is over 60km North from Jindo. Currently, all news channels abruptly stopped<u> broadcasting </u><b><u>information regarding</u> </b>the ship Sewol and Jindo.</font></span></div></div>