자막번역 확인좀 해주세요

왕좌의게임보다가 발번역이 많아서 답답해서 제가 부분정도만 수정할라고 수정중이긴한데

정말 발번역 될만 하더라고요;;;영어도모르는데;

If my wretched brother should somehow prevail,

these hens will return to their cocks and crow of how my courage inspired them,

lifted their spirits.

쓸모없는 동생놈이혹여 승리라도 한다면...

암탉들은 내 용기에 영혼이 감화 되었노라며

수탉과 까마귀에게 돌아가찬양하며 울어대겠지

하여튼 이런 느낌인데 혹시 수정몇 지적좀 가능하시면 부탁좀 드립니다


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If my wretched brother should somehow prevail, these hens will return to their cocks and crow of how my courage inspired them, lifted their spirits.

Read more: https://www.springfieldspringfield.co.uk/view_episode_scripts.php?tv-show=game-of-thrones&episode=s02e09

If my wretched brother should somehow prevail, these hens will return to their cocks and crow of how my courage inspired them, lifted their spirits.

Read more: https://www.springfieldspringfield.co.uk/view_episode_scripts.php?tv-show=game-of-thrones&episode=s02e09