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Today, i like to talk to you about coffee. i'll being by telling you about fun coffee story. then i'll list three thing i think are interesting about that

So let's start by talking about coffee. people have been drinking the coffee when they had exam or talking with their friend. So they go to coffee shop. coffee shop is important to us now. This place is increased everyday. i have a question. which one is many between coffee shop and bar? the answer is coffee shop. coffee shop is very comfortable and beautiful place. So many people spend their time in the coffee shop with talking, resting, and drinking. How the coffee come to us? first in the brazil, etiopea product the coffee in the farm. second the company buy that coffee. third this company circulat the coffee like mart, coffee shop. this coffee is made variety method.So change to ice coffee, moca, espreso. 
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